There's miraculously a lighter just laying on the floor. Mae as a mother is completely unrealistic. She reminds me of someone who takes uppers because she hates her life and needs to fake her way through it. I'm not trying to be mean, but she was written as a barely-there character who showed way too much flightiness for her part. The love triangle between Amber, Matthew and Daedree wasn't believable or necessary. Daedree has no interest in Matthew at first but without warning it's like a switch flipped inside her and suddenly she wants him to be her boyfriend or whatever.
And Matthew and Amber barely interact before they're talking about liking each other. Matthew barely acknowledges Daedree's feelings for him and seems to have none for her, until suddenly he does. And it's very confusing and doesn't need to be part of the story.
I think that, if there's going to be a romance at all, it should just be between Matthew and one person, presumably Amber, because she was there first, but I'd go for Daedree as well. If a reader sincerely doesn't care which girl the protagonist ends up with because they're both pretty similar and neither makes a difference, it's probably best to eliminate one arm of the triangle. The battle scene between Hunter and Snowball - there's a big plot problem right there.
I find it incredibly hard to believe that the noise inside the Grand Theatre was too loud for them to hear what was going on outside it. I also doubt they'd be so oblivious as to not feel the whole school shaking from the impact of Hunter and Snowball throwing each other all over the place. Also, if Daedree can talk to other people through their minds, why didn't she just go talk to the headmaster in the first place?
She was free at one point, Hunter was paying no attention to her, why did Amber have to risk Elijah's life by making him flash them back in time instead of letting Daedree take a nappy-nap and go talk to the headmaster in the Theatre? Why didn't anyone just run into the Theatre when Hunter was fighting with Snowball? The twins weren't terribly imposing at that point, once everyone was freed from the ice. Too many convenience explanations there were at least three points in the sequence where the author wrote a variation on "The noise inside the Theatre was too loud so no one heard the commotion outside.
Lastly, if Amber and Matthew had gone to warn the headmaster before all of this happened, why wouldn't he be keeping watch for something like this? It was implied that he semi-believed them, so you would think that instead of just randomly running out of the Theatre at the end of the battle, he would have come out a lot sooner. There is a lot of character confusion regarding who is present and who is speaking. I noticed a few instances of this. At one point Matthew asks Mr. Xoner if Alex can come to the dream school too, as if he wouldn't be able to anyway, and it wasn't even mentioned that I could remember that Alex was even in the room.
And in another moment, Elijah says something in Scapemaker even though he's in the hospital in the real world. It's most likely leftovers from editing, where a character was originally there but was removed, but again, another job for a proofer. Why would the three agents who had been paralyzed by fear slow down the others?
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Now for the more intricate details. Let me start with the story. It's a good one. It really is. I love how the author, Steven, writes in such detail. But the thing is, after a while, I kinda get bored. Not that the narration is boring. It's more like it's too slow or lengthy at times. I find myself speed-reading so I could finally get to the dialogues or the action.
The plot was very well thought of so it was okay. It really is an interesting book with an interesting story but I'm not sure if I have come to that point of being "in love" with the book. But when the action started happening, I was stuck to it. I imagine it would have been like being high on drugs but since I've never been high or on any kind of drug, I wouldn't know how that felt. I truly do want to read the next one.
Next part is, the characters. I just couldn't connect with them. I know that they're all interesting in ways and they do interest me but I just could not be very passionate with them. In the initial part of the story, I was generally sad about what happened with Matt losing his dad to Sandstorm prison. Who wouldn't be when a boy as young as him lost his own dad? But it's wasn't an overwhelming kind of sad.
The book didn't elate strong emotions from me I think that's a real problem for me. I know when a book is amazing when it can make me tear up or rage in frustration or blow up in anger when the characters do something real stupid. I was really missing that part about reading a book. I felt sort of distant with this one. I think that's because I couldn't get to know the characters that well. I was reading about them but they were strangers to me. I'm surprised at how good the physical aspects are described in this book when the emotional and personal aspects are not as clearly defined.
I find it difficult to imagine many of the characters so vividly in my head. The book needed more personality to it.
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The difference was that I saw them as characters and not really as people. They weren't very real to me because there was a lack of information about them. I'm not asking for addresses or phone numbers or schools or something like that. It needed more of the little details like for example, Mr.
Xoner hated cats because they always looked at Mr.
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Ferret funny like he was the most delicious thing in the world. Or something like, Matthew wears his lucky socks at every game, and hasn't washed them for 3 years since he'd won his first game. The little details that made the characters more like people you would actually know and say hi to in the halls or whenever you passed by. As I was reading the book, they seemed distant and unreachable to me, like I'd reach out for them and I'd just be ignored by them. I did not like that, to be honest. They seemed more like characters in a story following a plot than people who've ended up in a whole lot of trouble or looking for trouble to get to their goal.
Books are worlds in and of itself. To simply put, I was more like a bystander while I read and did not quite belong in it. My favorite characters so far are the triplets, Stanford, Stanley and Nacia. I love the bit where they can't be like a few feet away from each other. That would be so amazing if that were actually real. It's awesome, and fun. Next on my list is the world of the book itself. It is magnificent and I really wish I were a scaper just to get into their school. I am so jealous of these kids! I wish I was in there with them to make things a little more crazy with them.
This last part is about the cover. Like any other reader, I would also consider judgement over the cover. It's a nice cover but I don't find it eye-catching or very intriguing. The cover kind of adds to that desire to read it. It's a nice cover but it could have been better. Or creepier. Or something just as eerily like the book. I find the cover too simple for a story of this magnitude and honestly think that it does not do the book justice. Just saying. Cypert, please write the next book because I really want to know what happens next, and I'm curious about this Nox guy I've heard so much about.
Thanks Mar 05, Andrea Ika rated it liked it Shelves: ebook. Synopsis The limit between consciousness and subconsciousness is very thin. All we have to do is fall asleep to cross over. But a dreamscaper -- well, he doesn't have to do anything. He rules both worlds. My thought I was given a copy of this book by the author in return for an honest review.
The first couple of chapters were a little slow paced for my liking. This is a book that, once you pick up, you wont want to put down. Scapemaker is an enjoyable read. There are lots of twists and plenty of suspense and Scapemaker is a page-turner. I was willing to root for and follow Matthew through his adventure, however my attention faltered several times when the story focused on one of the secondary characters. And, for whatever reason, I just never felt a real connection to most of them.
I was overwhelmed with all the information that was given in the first few chapters. The strained relationship, the accident, another tragic event, the move, and then all the characteristics of what dreamscaping was about. A lot to take in. Things got better once Matthew settled and found a group of friends he could count on. I admire his determination to help his father, regardless of everything he kept from him.
Scapemaker is an intriguing first part in a series of YA novels. Matthew is an ordinary teenager—until his father is unexpectedly taken ill, and Matt discovers there is more to reality than he first thought. He learns that his father—and he himself—are dreamscapers. These are people who are able to consciously exist within a dream realm, which is full of fantastical creatures and a multitude of other dreamscapers. Schools in the 'real' world connect to Scapemaker, a dreamscape school for such sp Scapemaker is an intriguing first part in a series of YA novels.
Schools in the 'real' world connect to Scapemaker, a dreamscape school for such special students. Matthew finds out that his father's illness is related to supposedly criminal actions within the dreamscape, and determines to investigate to prove his father's innocence. He's having to deal with a move to another state and a new school there as well as his new life as a scaper, and it puts a fair amount of strain on him. Although he's the main character in the book, I couldn't really get along with Matthew. He screams, he sulks, he quips and smirks two things in particular that make my toes curl, but that's my foible , he varies between incredible levels of arrogance and incredible levels of stupidity.
His saving grace is his belief in his family and his willingness to go to any lengths to clear his father's name and protect his mother. It's not to say that Matthew is shallow or badly described—he, like the other characters in the book, are detailed and believable. I just found Matt to grate somewhat. I don't know, perhaps I'm just a bit too far from being a teenager myself and entirely the wrong gender to be able to relate to Matthew, but I really hope he improves in the next book in the series.
There were a few typos in this book, but not many. Curiously enough, I read a book by a different author a few months back which seemed to have the same thing going on, which is that most of the typos that show up are the right word, but the wrong spelling. It's almost like the book has gone through some kind of speech to text process—things like peak instead of peek, you're instead of your, and so on.
It's the kind of thing some readers find distracting, while others will just skip over them. Also, I should mention here that there are some deliberate errors, particularly in the speech patterns of one of the characters in the book. Steve Cypert has written a rich alternate reality, and moved away from some stereotypes common in so many works of fiction—for instance, vampires in this world are somewhat different than you might have run into before. The author has also created some new and nasty critters, and mixes those in with more traditional beasties to good effect.
Scapemaker is presented in detail although it would have been interesting to learn a bit more about the classes the students attend , with different areas of the building carefully described. The action sequences are full of adrenaline, and there are hints of things to come towards the end. I am intrigued to see what happens next with this series, as this book did have a lot of originality and there's the potential for this series to head off in all sorts of different directions. All in all, enjoyable.
This book was kindly provided by the author as a free e-book—thankyou! The author has had no input to or preview of this review. It's all my own work I'll start with the cover. It really think it's vague and gives one little idea about the content of the book itself. I know the black might be for night terrors, blue for the magineum that appears as blue sand in real world and the eyes on the cover are of a skin-walker, but I still stand by what I just mentioned. The book had a lot of potential and if only the cover would have been intriguing and captivating, it would have been better.
I just feel it could be so much more and hope the second b I'll start with the cover. I just feel it could be so much more and hope the second book would have a more interesting cover. Initially, I wasn't captivated by this book. I didn't spend all my free time reading it and got easily distracted which is saying something since I do not get distracted once I put my mind to something.
It was a lot to take in at first since the setting was pure fantasy. It reminded me of Insidious movie once I read the prologue. Things seemed very descriptive to me at times which clearly indicated the amount of effort, hard work and labour put into this book. It also highlighted that the author might have wanted the readers to picture exactly what he had in mind as to assure complete understanding of the dream world-but I might be wrong.
It was perhaps the fifth chapter that finally got my head into the book which appeared as a puzzle to me. But, as more pieces started appearing, things got interesting. Some parts were very thrilling and nice, like the graveyard scene. I'll admit I have a thing for graveyards so my opinion could be biased but I really liked it. It was fairly intriguing and well-written. However, it did not stop me from feeling that a good editor would have been extremely beneficial to this novel by shaping and polishing it; the format could've been improved, too, since it seemed improper and unclear-kind of mixed, I would say.
Now, the characters were interesting but I was king of looking forward to read more about Misery and Steve and was disappointed to find out they were not mentioned throughout the book. I kept thinking that they'd appear in the story but they didn't. And, then there's Matthew. His true potential and talents in the dream world are still partially unknown.
There's seems to be a lot of potential for this particular character and I'm looking forward to see how the author develops it. Many dream world creatures, a. Imagi, were also created and they weren't bad. Nothing seemed particularly out of place, although, I would like to know more about each character and their abilities. There were also parts when I would've liked answers and more elaboration. For example, when Eli and Amber take everyone in the past. Now, we know that Amber lent Eli her abilities but what exactly those abilities were, I'm still kind of in dark about that.
And, then there's Hunter's escape unexplained and the purpose Doby's key has yet to fulfill and Amber's appearance in the climax. How she got there should have been explained since she appeared out of the blue. There's still much to learn and discover about this new world that the author wishes to familiarize us with. So, I guess the journey just started and hopefully, all the answers would be in the second book. I also liked the way first book ended. It was was interesting and I hope the story would be better executed in the second book to enhance the plot further.
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Scapemaker struck me as a book that is good on itself, but has important improvement potential with some extra? Also, all characters main and secondary would be more appealing if developed a little beyoond the facts. It also has its romantic part, for those more interested than me in that aspects of stories : It's the kind of book I imagine would attract people who liked Harry Potter, The Mysterious Benedict Society and also the kind of witty humor you can find in Eoin Colfer and Jonathan Stroud books the book is not approached entirely from an overall funny point of view, as those books are, but it has its memorable humor moments.
Finally, I'd like to highlight some additional aspects about Scapemaker: 1 I specially enjoyed the world of dreams and dreamscaping this is the ability the main charachter --Matt Namely has--, and consist of being able to consciosuly enter a dream-state the author created. I found his descriptions of the dream world, its inhabitants and other distinctive features, both credible and engaging; you can find new definitions for "night terrors" and "vampires", for example and vampires keep being creepy, but they don't suck blood.
The only exception for this was the ending. I thought the last chapter made everything end too abruptly. I would have been more satisfied yet waiting for the next book , if all had ended the previous chapter. I guess it responds partly to demographics in the audience: lately, paranormal YA fantasy usually has girl main charachters and some romance in the way. I'm not saying I don't enjoy some of those when the overall story is great and wonderfully written in fact, Insurgent and Divergent, which meet the above criteria are amongst my favourite books.
Just stating I wish we don't loose boy main characters forever : 4 Read this book! You don't want to miss the next one when it has the ominous, cool title "Soul Feeders" ; Scapemaker by Steve V. Cypert Dani's Rating: 3. For me, Scapemaker was an okay read.
It is a long fantasy book that I think would be better if the slow parts were condensed. The beginning was slow and it annoyed me that it took so long for the main character, Matthew Namely, to f Scapemaker by Steve V. The beginning was slow and it annoyed me that it took so long for the main character, Matthew Namely, to find out what was going on.
Matthew came home from school one day to find bad news awaiting him: the death of his best friend Dobian Brown and his father in a coma. He struggled with his grief and began to see paranormal events unfolding around him. A mysterious girl kept popping up in the strangest places.
He saw a weird wolf-thing. He encountered a kid who seemed to have 2 people inside of him. Finally, when he is introduced to the "dream-world" he starts to understand what is going on with his world. Scapemaker begins to become much more interesting and enjoyable at this point. I liked learning about Steve Cypert's various fantasy concepts such as mer-water, night- terrors, and skinwalkers. They were all very creative ideas, but at some parts of the novel it was confusing and overwhelming. There are many minor characters who provide comic relief and banter to fill the slow parts of Scapemaker.
I felt that Steve's writing fluctuated from good to bad throughout this novel. Sometimes he used cliche expressions like "Matthew screamed like a girl", but sometimes he made great use of imagery and really transported the reader into the scene of the novel. The fight scenes were particularly good because it introduced suspense, which in my opinion wasn't a large component of Scapemaker. The second half of Scapemaker when Matthew is trying to solve the mystery of what happened to Doby and his father was fun to read.
He was in dangerous situations, faced formidable foes, and experienced a teensy bit of romance with a girl named Amber. But romance lovers, don't get your hopes up. There is barely any romance in this fantasy novel. There are some typos in Scapemaker, but hey, it was independently published by Mr. Indie authors have a harder time than authors affiliated with a large publishing company at editing their novels.
I think Scapemaker will only be enjoyed and loved by readers who can continue reading through slow parts. It is not a fast-paced novel so some impatient readers may stop reading in the beginning. But if you are a patient reader, you will love Scapemaker! The innovative creatures and concepts will fascinate you and you will be captivated by the plot. Nov 27, Amie's Book Reviews rated it liked it. I believe that when an author asks for an honest review, they actually do want honesty.
The purpose of reviews are two-fold. One is for potential readers to read the review and to use it to help determine whether or not they might be interested in reading that particular book. The second reason for author's to want their book's reviewed is that they want constructive criticism. Any good author will always be looking to hone and improve his or her craft. If your purpose for reading this review is to decide whether or not you want to read "Scapemaker" then let me say that you should most definitely read this book. It is entertaining and the author has imagined an entire world that is living alongside ours.
His imagination has brought this world to life and will keep even the most jaded reader's attention right the very end.
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I absolutely thought that the storyline of Scapemaker was brilliant. The characters are well developed and the author does a terrific job of making the reader care about the characters. I am very much looking forward to reading the sequel. That said, you are probably wondering why, if I thought the story was great, did I only give it 3 out of 5 stars? Well, the answer is simple. The author desperately needs an editor. If this book had been properly edited, I would have rated it as 5 out of 5 stars. Any book you purchase at a regular book store has been edited by professionals before being printed and distributed for sale.
New authors often do not have the benefit of professional editors. This can be both a blessing and a curse. To illustrate what I mean when I say that this book needs an editor, I have listed several examples below: 1. There are numerous times when the author meant to use the word "past" and instead it reads "passed.
The author wrote: " It should have read " Another example of using an incorrect term was when he wrote: "The stream rose from the natural slits Toone grabbed Duncan by the waste. Should be "waist. Dec 16, Dave Higgins rated it liked it Shelves: reviewed.
This novel is about a boy who discovers he has magical powers and is taken to a school for the gifted.
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The story opens with a series of unusual events which reveal that Matthew Namely has the power to enter the dream world. His powers can be dangerous, to both himself and others, so he is This novel is about a boy who discovers he has magical powers and is taken to a school for the gifted. His powers can be dangerous, to both himself and others, so he is enrolled in Scapemaker, one of a several schools for those capable of interacting with dreams. While he is still attempting to come to terms with another world parallel to the mundane his best friend is killed and his father left in a coma.
When his father is blamed for murder and the loss of a mystical artefact, Matthew sets out to prove him innocent. The magical system in this book is interesting and internally consistent, and is placed within a believable adaptation of the modern world; while there are fantastical elements such as gremlins and dragons, they are only part of magical society, and there are sound reasons for them not to interact with the mundane world.
The plot is engaging with a good balance of serious magical threats and mundane teenage problems.
It advances at a good pace without seeming rushed. The characterisation is mixed. Most of the main characters have distinct believable personalities; the two potential love interests are particularly well realised, and make full use of the potential of a world in which a person's physical appearance can vary between the mundane and dream worlds. However, Cypert often tells the reader what a character is like instead of letting their dialogue and actions show their character. Combined with heavy use of adjectives and complex speech verbs, this counteracts the effect of otherwise solid work.
The point of view is often centred on Matthew but sometimes strays between several other characters within the same scene, or adopts an entirely external view. In some scenes the narrator is omniscient, and some early scenes use divine irony, whereas in others even a character's words are hidden from the narrator. Along with the didactic style of the writing this often makes Cypert's choice to share information or not very obvious to the detriment of immersion. As an additional consideration for British English speakers, these stylistic issues made the use of American English more than usually noticeable.
Overall I enjoyed this novel, and will probably read the rest of the series. However, the ideas were let down by a lack of editing. I received a free copy of this book from the author. Dec 18, Delaine rated it did not like it. The concept of the book is a great one, one I haven't come across before.
But there were some things I could just not bode with in terms of character development and the amount of detail used to describe things that only need a few words, not paragraphs. At one point I felt overwhelmed with the description of a scene that it all just escaped me, I could not describe it to anyone who asked me without referring back to that page. How many times must you be told not to do something before you actually listen? I'd run through the halls if I ever encountered a ghost, not fidget. Totally disregarding three instructions he given from his Escher's and even an FBI agent, oh man this is one ballsy kid.
The love triangle that materialized out of nowhere that is totally not needed. First Matt meets Amber in this totally mysterious way amr thinks she's very pretty, then a girl he been going to school with for who knows how long turns out to be part of this new world and begins to look speaking to Matt even though she thinks he's self absorbed, but then she starts to like him after working with him on saving his father's name In the end, Amber and Matthew are talking about a way around the rules to be together but during the final battle all Matt could think about was saving Daedree the other girl There were some scenes in the book where it is described that something was so loud or obvious but the person there was not concentrated on that aspect even though it is so glaring obvious Why are they over looking such an obvious detail?
How could no one else feel or great two monsters going at it? How could Matt not tell that the image he saw writing on the bed was not his actual mother, or the zombie mom coming at him? As a matter of fact, how could he totally ignore being told that he's in a night terror's twisted game and that it's not real? I didn't totally hate this book, but I didn't enjoy it as much as I would've liked to. And that ending? Oh dear. I'm sorry. Jun 04, Amber rated it it was amazing. Scapemaker is a beautifully compelling and wonderfully intricate story of discovering an unknown heritage and fighting to honor it with your whole heart.
This is an adventure that will inspire and delight daydreamers and readers of fantasy alike.